Tiffin Girls' & HBS · 11+ Stage 1 Prep Spotting Missing or Wrong Punctuation
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Punctuation · Proofreading

Become a punctuation detective

This is the skill the real paper tests most: you're shown a sentence (or a set of them) and must find the one place where punctuation is missing or wrong. It pulls together every rule you've learned. The secret is a calm, fixed checklist — scan the same things, in the same order, every time.

Check 1 The two ends of the sentence

Look at the first letter (capital?) and the last mark (. ? or !). These are the easiest marks to miss.

we won the match → We won the match.

Check 2 Capitals for names

Every proper noun — person, place, day, month — needs a capital. Scan for names hiding in lower case.

i saw tom in london on friday → I saw Tom in London on Friday.

Check 3 Commas — too few or too many

Check lists (commas between items), fronted adverbials (comma after), and clauses. Watch for the comma splice — two whole sentences joined by just a comma.

It was late, we went home. → It was late. We went home. (or "...late, so we went home.")

Check 4 Apostrophes — missing or misused

Contractions need one (dont → don't); possession needs one (the dogs bone → the dog's bone); plain plurals must NOT have one (apple's → apples). And its/it's.

Its the dogs ball. → It's the dog's ball.

Check 5 Speech marks & their punctuation

Speech marks wrap the spoken words; the end mark and comma go inside; a comma comes before the speech opens.

She said "stop". → She said, "Stop."
The detective's checklist (use it on every question):
1. Capital at the start?   2. Correct end mark (. ? !)?
3. Capitals on all names?   4. Commas right (not too many/few, no splice)?
5. Apostrophes right (contraction / possession / NOT a plural)?
6. Speech marks: comma before, capital first word, end mark inside?
The 30-second method

How to find the error fast

  1. Read the whole thing once — the error often "jumps out" as something that looks or sounds off.
  2. Run the checklist in order: ends → names → commas → apostrophes → speech.
  3. There is usually ONE error — once you've found a clear mistake, that's your answer.
  4. Beware the comma splice and the missing apostrophe — they're the most common traps.
  5. If a sentence already looks perfect, "No error" may be the correct choice — but check the list first.

10 worked examples

Read the sentence, then the error and the fix.

1. we are going to spain in july
Missing capitals & full stop: We are going to Spain in July. (ends + names)
2. It was raining, we stayed inside.
Comma splice: use a full stop or "so" — It was raining. We stayed inside.
3. The dog wagged it's tail.
Wrong apostrophe: it's = it is. Belonging to it = its tail.
4. I bought apple's and pears.
Apostrophe in a plural: apples (no apostrophe).
5. She said "come here".
Speech punctuation: She said, "Come here." (comma before, capital, full stop inside)
6. After lunch we went out.
Missing comma: After lunch, we went out. (fronted adverbial)
7. can you help me
Missing capital & question mark: Can you help me?
8. I like apples bananas and grapes.
Missing list commas: apples, bananas and grapes.
9. The girls' coats were wet. (one girl)
Apostrophe position: if one girl, it's the girl's coat. Position shows how many owners.
10. My friend Sara is here.
No error — capital start, capital name, full stop. Always allow for a correct sentence.

Mock paper — 20 questions

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Pick one answer (A–E) for each question. The timer starts when you answer your first.